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PostPosted: Fri Jun 10, 2011 1:28 pm 
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Chapter 29.

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Chapter 30, introducing a new character, Hatch, inspired by the winner of the ATR custom contest KeepItCleanCustoms.

He was asked what role he'd like to play and well what he picked is exactly what I needed. So here's to you KICC. Just a small taste of what's to come.

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Who'd a thunk it, got Chapter 31 up today. Here begin the exploits of Zartan.

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On a roll today. Not much else to do other than write. Chapter 32: Enter the Mortal.

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Two new chapters up.

33 - Lt Onesi v Cobra Mortal
34 - The Signal

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As always let me know what ya think.

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Chapters 35 and 36

Over the River...

...Through the Woods.

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As always feel free to comment on each chapter on the site. If you like what you read join and take part. Thanks!

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Chapter 37:

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2 New Chapters up tonight. Getting ever closer to Chapter 50 and ATR Contest #2.

Enjoy and as always let me know what you think.

Please if you enjoy what you read click the Chapter Title and scroll down and click the Facebook "LIKE" button. Thanks very much.

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Chapter 40 up. Enter the Pirates!

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Please be sure to click "Like" after reading and please leave a comment let me know what you think.

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i would like to commend you on a gret series of stories as well as customs. keep creating and i will continue to be entertained and inspired by ur brilliance. i love the stories of the various charactors, the customs and the site.
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Thanks dalahn57, glad you're enjoying the story. You keep reading and I'll keep writing. In fact to say thank you for reading here's a new chapter:

Chapter 41: Homeward

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As always if you like what you read please click the facebook "Like" button on the bottom of the page. And feel free to leave comments, critiques, questions, hints, hiakus, or suggestions on the site. If you have any characters you'd like to see become involved in the ATR well say so, or even still make 'em. Thanks to all who read it.

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A big day for updates. 3 new chapters by me PLUS a special chapter written by guest writer Priest. Check 'em out.

As always please feel free to leave comments let me know what you like, dislike, who you'd like to see, etc. Also please click the Facebook "Like" button on the Chapters you like the most.

Chapter 42: Vipers Nest: Unexpected Guests

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Chapter 43: Vipers Nest: The Next Day

http://allthatremains2010.webs.com/apps ... e-next-day

Chapter 44: Vipers Nest: Sneak Peek

This one is special. I'm going to try something different here. I'm leaving it up to you, the readers, what happens next. Read the COMMENT section after the chapter to find out how YOU can help shape the next Chapters of the ATR.

http://allthatremains2010.webs.com/apps ... sneak-peek

Chapter 45: The Double Cross (By Guest Writer PRIEST)

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Do you have an idea for a chapter for the ATR? Want to make a dio story? Well write it up send it to me and see your work in all it's ATR glory.

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Okay folk. Major updates coming soon. Lots of figures that have been mentioned in the story to finally have figures shown. Also, I'd like to hear form you all about the fate of Sneak Peek turning sides or not...

Let's here it. Does he stay Joe or turn Cobra???

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NEWEST Chapter posted. It's been a while I know. Finally found the time to write characters I've wanted to for a while.

CHAPTER 46:

http://allthatremains2010.webs.com/apps ... hipwrecked

Please feel free to comment on what ya like or don't by clicking the Comment button on the site.

A big thanks to everyone who reads my little attempt at creativity and entertainment.

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Posted Ch 47. Expect a few more tonight.

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